from Ten songs to a friend


This mournful moon, this unquietness
This convulsion inside, island
in solitude, dying body
all this I owe you. And they were vast
the things planned, ships,
ivory walls, large words
Concede, always. And it would be December
A jade horse over the waters
Double transparence, suspended line
All these things at the tip of your fingers
And all was undone in the portal of time
In livid silence. Some glass mornings
Wind, the hallowed soul, a sun I don't see

This too I owe you.

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Renan Piccolo Colombini

I second Vanusa, and I’d like to add one more issue with this poem

The “jade horse” is suppose to be under water, not above, according to the original Poem.

Vanusa, I think you could keep the alliteration of Lua enlutada with “mournful moon” or even “mourn is the moon”


brilliant poem

Steve Cohen

definitely a favorite of mine!

Ana Britto

Hi, this a lovely poem.
Where can I find the whole poem by Hilda Hilst? I’ve “googled” it and got more than one version. 
I really enjoy this website. It would be great to find more Brazilian poems here:)
Thanks a lot
Ana Britto


nice job

julie harpum

these poems are seriousy beautiful why are they not better known in europe?

Vanusa Pedrozo

I speak Portuguese and English and I saw some problems in the final translation for this poem.
In the first line, "Essa lua enlutada, esse desassossego," there is the alliteration of lua (moon) and enlutada (adjective for the one who is mourning). I know it is impossible to keep the alliteration, but I believe the image of the moon is important in the poem, since the idea is that even the moon is sad, and reflects the speaker’s feeling.
Also in the 11th and 12th lines, the images "some glass mornings/wind, the hollowed soul" do not exist in the original poem. In the original poem, the literal translation is "In livid silence. A sun I can’t see/ this to I owe you." You could check because the confusion might be result of a typing mistake in the original poem, since in the literal translation by Beatriz Passos those two lines are there too.

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