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At Thirty, the Party Is Over

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Literal translator's note: [1] I? That Somebody? He?

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C.P. Ravikumar

The translation by Hayeon Na is amazing.

Marco

Great website! I love this poem. Thanks.

Isam

Both of the two transltions are good ;forthe poem itself is excellent and its axial theme is too strong and clear to be submerged by translation

Missvi

lovely.  i like the frankness of the voice.

Bobby(from wyoming)

yo love the poetry, really drew me into it.

Hayeon Na

Here is an alternative translation of the poem sent in by Hayeon Na:
Of course I know,
Yes, Of course I know that I’ve enjoyed
the revolutionist rather than the revolution,
the bar rather than the drinks.
And when I was lonely,
I’ve enjoyed the sweet low hum of a love song
Rather than an ‘O Comrade’ anthem.
But does it matter now?
The feast is over.
the liquor’s gone,
and though people left one by one;
finally even he,
after paying their dues,
and finding their shoes,
I know, in the back of my mind,
that
There will be somebody here, alone,
cleaning up the table for the hostess,
remembering everything with her bitter scalding tears,
that
she will finish the unfinished song that he had started.
Yes, maybe, I know.
that
she will set up the table and call them back
before the sunrise.
she will light the stage once more
with all preparations done.
But does it matter now?
But does it matter now.

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